ВКС «Государственная итоговая аттестация (ОГЭ и ЕГЭ). Письмо. Трудные случаи» Фаддеева Екатерина Анатольевна (ГБОУ СОШ № 35) Чекерда Елена Александровна (ГБОУ гимназия № 24 имени И.А.Крылова) Сирош Ольга Николаевна (ГБОУ гимназия № 24 имени И.А.Крылова) …I know you had your birthday yesterday. Where and how did you celebrate it this year? What presents did you get and which of them did you like most? How do you plan to share photos from the party, if at all? Oh, by the way, my elder sister has moved to New York … Ответы на вопросы Where and how did you celebrate it this year? A) On the actual birthday we had a big dinner... Where and how did you celebrate it this year? B) I’ll celebrate my birthday with my friends in the café ‘Night Wolves’ on Sunday, we’ll have a big dinner... Where and how did you celebrate it this year? C) I threw my birthday party at home. All my friends came with presents, we danced, sang songs and we had a lot of fun... …I know you had your birthday yesterday. Where and how did you celebrate it this year? What presents did you get and which of them did you like most? How do you plan to share photos from the party, if at all? Oh, by the way, my elder sister has moved to New York … A) Yes, I can share photos, send me your email. B) I’m going to send the best photos to everyone who came as it’s a tradition. C) Sorry, I didn’t take photos. Постановка вопросов − ask 3 questions about her sister’s new accommodation As for your sister, I’m glad to hear such great news! Does she like it? Do you often visit her? Did your sister design her house herself? Next week we’ll have a fancy-dress ball at school, I can’t wait … − ask 3 questions about a fancy-dress ball Организация личного письма ‘Well, speaking of presents I got many books, clothes and flowers. But I liked every gift, but the camera which my aunt gave me impressed me most.’ ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ • подмена жанра на эссе «За и против» • отход от темы или изложение выученного текста • стилистические ошибки ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ • несоответствие/ повтор/ недостаточное раскрытие аргументации заявленному тезису (мнению); • неправильное формирование контраргументов; • неправильное деление на абзацы ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ • логические ошибки, в том числе расхождение авторской точки зрения во 2 абзаце и в выводе; • неумение сформулировать проблему во вступлении; • средства логической связи; • несоблюдение объема Extreme sports help to build character. • Nowadays a lot of people go in for extreme sports. That is why they often argue if extreme sports help to build character. Extreme sports help to build character. • Nowadays a lot of people go in for different kinds of sport. Some people claim that this is necessary to build character while others argue that sport is just a hobby. Extreme sports help to build character. • Nowadays a lot of people go in for extreme sports. Some people say that extreme sports are good for building character. However, there are people who are sure that these kinds of sport are useless occupations. Internet is the greatest time-waster. Internet is the greatest time-waster. Неподвижный образ жизни Много ненужного во время поиска Соц.сети/ онлайн игры вызывают зависимость В ущерб полезным делам Поиск учебной информации Дистанционное образование 2 Общение с людьми, которые далеко 1 Дома, а не в дурной компании Онлайн покупки 2 абзац. 1 предложение. А) I agree with the first opinion about Internet. B) To my mind, Internet does good to people and is not a waste of time. C) In my opinion, there are both good and bad points of using internet. 2 абзац. To my mind, Internet does good to people and is not a waste of time. Firstly, + аргумент. + Раскрытие. Secondly, + аргумент. + Раскрытие. 3 абзац. However, there are people who suppose that Internet provides spending too much time in front of the screen. АРГУМЕНТ. + РАСКРЫТИЕ 4 абзац. Nevertheless, I disagree with the ! opposing opinion because КОНТРАРГУМЕНТ + РАСКРЫТИЕ ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ •To sum up, I would like to say that Internet is really a very important thing in our life. •In conclusion, I would like to state that people spend time on the net in different ways and it is up to them how to use Internet. ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ • All in all, despite all the arguments about the Internet as a great time-waster, I believe that people cannot socialize, work and study well without the world net as it plays an important role nowadays. Организация эссе Nowadays teenage students aren’t only concentrated on their studies but also engaged in part time jobs. Some people support this tendency thinking it has a positive impact on them. The opposing point of view is that it results in becoming an underachiever. Организация эссе Nevertheless, some people believe that working distracts students from studying. Education is considered to be a matter of their utmost importance for them because they should focus on getting a degree.